Consumed
October 16, 2012 7 Comments
All she can ask
Is for a casket
Shrouded shades deceive
As if there is a He
Subservience,
Imperialistic Providence
Singing seas in mist,
Metaphysical Nothingness
Get out of Paris
It does not exist
Everywhere: the Aran Islands,
Breaking waves in defiance
And so it goes, hey?
Very nice words.
Hope you had a great day!💋
They aren’t words, more like ideas.
Then, I ❤ the way you string your ideas together.💋
very cool.
Yes, used to be lengthier, but I take great influence from Ezra Pound’s economy of language.
Those first two lines are quite stunning. I like the rest, but that is quite a way to begin.
Thanks for following my Brautigan blog. He too was a poet of few words.
Yes, the first two lines are inspired by the play, Riders to the Sea. Thanks for the reply.