Each Asteroid Looms

a thousand breaths

sinking tongue

moons chasing their lovers

why and how

mutual death

He has a beard

sheep falling

where she found food


just let Him weep

inside His cave

and then the lamb

will shift the grave

(into silent space)

7 replies on “Each Asteroid Looms”

as i read through the poem the visual quality of your piece seemed like shifting shadows. when i have a moment, i’ll go back and reread it so i can be more definite. i may not be very good at expressing what i’m thinking. :D however, i didn’t find the poem ambiguous. and though you may have intentended ambiguity, that’s not what struck me about it as i read it.

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