Categories Poems Unbearable Air Post author By Serotonin Post date September 23, 2013 9 Comments on Unbearable Air Our atmosphere results in humidity- beyond palpable Tags memory, perception, poetry, retrospect, senryu, suffocate, writing ← While Travelling → Illuminated Leaves Conjure Memories 9 replies on “Unbearable Air” Thank you! Thank you good sir. Senryu is one of my favorite forms. Form and body as in writing, or humans? I like yours better Nice blog! Very soulful… :) P.S. It is amusing we critics are pursuing duplicating forms The form is perfect but the body has no soul so our hearts care not. And soon It will be Beyond breathable. Share Your Thoughts Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (Address never made public) Name Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.